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First
Edition ~ Second Edition
What's the Difference?
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First
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Second
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Dave Fox won the Erma Bombeck Writers Workshop
Book Proposal Contest in 2004 for his proposal to write
Getting Lost: Mishaps of an Accidental Nomad. The prize:
a package of services from AuthorHouse, a company that uses
"Print-On-Demand" self-publishing technology.
With that publishing package, the self-edited first edition
was published in June, 2006.
A year later, Dave signed with Inkwater Press
to publish a second edition through traditional publishing
channels (as opposed to self-publishing). That edition was
released in March, 2008.
In the revision process for the second edition,
many of the chapters were re-edited, with improved writing
and tighter endings. Many of the short essays in the last
section of the book were cut from the second edition
not because they were bad, but because they did not fit
the tone of the rest of the book. (Dave hopes to eventually
republish these essays elsewhere, but that could take a
while.) Other chapters in the last section were folded into
a new final chapter, which replaced the original ending.
With the new edition came a new layout. Dave
was sad to bid farewell to the gang of sheep who graced
the cover of edition one. That cover was designed by Rhonda
Pelikan, an independent graphic designer. Inkwater wanted
a clear distinction between the first and second editions,
so their own goddess of design, Masha Shubin, set out in
search of the perfect bovine. Masha has also done a phenomenal
job with the interior layout in the second edition, adding
whimsical mini-sketches in the margins to illustrate Dave's
adventures.
Approximately 700 copies of the first self-published
edition were printed. Dave still has a few copies for sale
on this website, as well as plenty of copies of the second
edition. He's happy to autograph them.
Which edition is best for you? Edition one
has rougher editing, but it contains bonus chapters and
it's cheaper. Edition two went through a more thorough editing
process, and it's got a more playful interior design. Can't
decide? Dave will sell you both of them together for a super
low price!
Order the Book
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Differences
at a Glance
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Edition
1 |
Edition
2 |
| Editing |
Self-edited
by Dave. |
Professionally
edited. |
| Chapters |
Contains
nine stories not found in edition two. |
Some
chapters have been deleted not because they were
bad, but because they didn't fit the overall flow of
the book. |
| Ending |
Contains
space aliens. |
All-new,
space-alien-free ending. |
| Interior |
Pure
as an arctic glacier. |
Cluttered
with nifty sketches in the margins. |
| Cover |
Baah!
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Moo!
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